A Memorable Holiday
Talk about a holiday you will always remember.
- Where you went and who you went with
- What you did there
- Why the holiday was memorable
The holiday I will always remember is the trip I took to Langkawi with my family two years ago. We travelled there during the school break, and honestly, it was the first time all five of us had gone away together. On the first day we took the cable car up to the sky bridge, and although I am quite afraid of heights, the view of the rainforest and the sea below was absolutely worth it. In the evenings we would walk along Cenang Beach, eat grilled seafood at the night market and just talk about anything. What made it memorable was not really the places we visited but the fact that my father, who normally works six days a week, was completely relaxed and present with us. Whenever I look at the photographs now, I remember that feeling of being together with no rush, and I think that is why the holiday still means so much to me.
Examiner note: Fully covers all three bullet points, uses a wide range of vocabulary (‘absolutely worth it’, ‘present with us’), varied tenses, and a clear personal reflection at the end. Minor hesitations would not reduce the score.